is this elsha spreading her wings?

Nice one ElshaHawk.

I personally very much enjoy your ability to title your works. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoy reading the body as well, but I reckon you have a bit of a talent for nice titles, which I struggle with.

very nice writing, this could really go far. However, I dont’ really understand how in the first paragraph it’s like in third person, but the rest is in first.

hmm good point, Elice, I guess I zoomed in on the scene in my mind. the line from the book was in third person, and I focused in on my character, making the jump to first. :) good eye!

Nice Job ElshaHawk, like always you draw us into your story.

I do so like a good line from a detective novel.