snippers? i think you mean snipers or sniper in the pool.. :)
the schoolgirls’ arms confused me..
nice idea having the pool empty though..

if time slows down, then it would take week for the ball to bounce so a girl playing jacks would barely be moving when she scooped up jacks. get it?

okay i get the time slowing down so he can catch on tiny glimpse of skin and pull the trigger at the precise moment, so you’re saying he has to wait a LONG time to see the target, then. That’s where I lost you. I guess I didn’t put enough stock into the title.

see just because its escape fiction doesn’t mean the reader shouldn’t have to think at all

thanks for doing my challenge :)