A nice little piece (I haven’t read the other parts yet). A beautiful moment in a budding relationship. I’d like a little more sense of his emotional reaction – heart racing, sweaty palms, what have you. I very much like the ending image.
A nice little piece (I haven’t read the other parts yet). A beautiful moment in a budding relationship.
I’d like a little more sense of his emotional reaction – heart racing, sweaty palms, what have you.
I very much like the ending image.
April Raines