haha, death by underwear! great secret! never would have thought of that!

:O i can’t even describe that but i will try with one word. GENUIS!

That is a very clever, and skin-crawlingly terrifying, idea. I’ll never see a lingerie catalogue in quite the same way again…

Dark and well done. I like this twist very much…and it makes me think about what would happen if she died without the wish being fulfilled…

you are brilliant, a deceptokan surrounded by bullwinckes this is so original

awesome story. you really put alot of thought into this. very creative.

WOOOOOWWWWW.

blush So many good words, so many people! The praise of fellow writers is the gold of the realm. I thank all of you, and encourage you to take a look at my other works here – either you’ll like them just as much, or I’ll learn how to be an even better writer. :D

Nice work!

Victoria’s dark secret :-) I must admit, I don’t think it’s your best… a bit higher on concept than on character or rich story. But still well written.