It is often said that beauty is pain…it’d be interesting to see how many people lined up to have something like this done were it really possible. This is well done.

I really liked the tone of this story. A very good read.

Biomancer is an AWESOME word!!!
Great stuff here..

Biomancer is awesome! i would love to see this fleshed out:) into a whole universe! I think we would respect girls with implants more if we knew they had to SUFFER to get them. Great ficly!