This is a cunning look at humanity, and I like it very much. The last line makes you double take and rethink the rest of the piece. two thumbs up One typo: “I’ve believe it is one of your greatest gifts.” Should just be I believe…
This is a cunning look at humanity, and I like it very much. The last line makes you double take and rethink the rest of the piece. two thumbs up
One typo: “I’ve believe it is one of your greatest gifts.” Should just be I believe…
MOAR!
‘Double take’ is the perfect description for the ending. I thought I knew what this piece was about. I didn’t. That’s good. :)
Very nice story! You really did make us doublethink!
O this is so freakin good. But it makes you wonder is it still othet aliens they just call themselves humans also. lol
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