wait, what baby?!
Nice story, very dramatic and fast paced. The Father is a very scary figure. I’m pretty sure I don’t like him at all. :) Hiding behind noble acts…

that was the last secret – she was pregnant! :: music climbs dramatically ::

explodes that was very suspenseful. I am sad to see that it is over. or is it? 0.o

OoOoOo. I love that suprise ending! Please continue? Very unique characters, and interesting twists throughout.