oh you are twisted sad and sick i am adding you to my friend list i love this story

The title amuses me.

i’m a little confused… but nevertheless its a nicely written story.

i want to know what’s going on!!

how is Laura related to Nancy?
Who adopted who?
Ooh, this one got my head spinning round.
But I like it.

Nice twist! My heart ached for Liz, imagining how much anticipation went into that moment… walking through the door. I would have been more vague and used “she” when describing the fake Nancy’s actions so it wasn’t quite as confusing to the reader when real Nancy walked in and called her Laura. But overall very nice!

To the people who are confused, maybe try reading it out loud?

I loved the way introductions were used throughout the whole Ficlyt. The ending, however, was a bit awkward to me.