Unauthorized you mean?

see it isnt that muffy took a blurry image, his mouth really is blurry.

Oh dear… I think the human race might be in a bit of trouble here…

Couple of punctuation points:

“By God man, what’s he taking?” needs an extra comma, really, i.e. “By God, man, what’s…”

Also, “Everything.” He said ought to be “Everything,” he said"

Nicely done, though. I almost wish hack detection really did come with alarms and flashing lights, rather than the dull emails full of logfiles that I get. :-)

This spells troubbble…

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