I like how you tweaked the challenge in a way different from anyone else, how you fit it to your character. I liked it. Thanks for doing my challenge :)

very nice indeed .. i hope he comes back, this man, in another ficly.

I remember this challenge and kind of fun that it was your start in ficly…if I saw correctly looking back over your stuff.
A fun entry, though the middle got a bit muddled for me.