http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cyberpunk this is a link that describes what cyberpunk is. if you want to rewrite this story in order to fit said genere william gibson is also an excellent source or you can watch a movie like dune. as it stands this is simply scifi good try though.

Leather grown in vats. A femme fatale assassin reminiscent of Molly Millions. Wetware (however you spell it) plugged into the back of your head and moved around in a transport vat. Gloves that automatically clean themselves of gore. Seems plenty cyberpunk to me.

I’m with bluefish. Very cyberpunky. Also chillingly written. Top stuff.

This is really good skully I like it alot. I think what “not you” meant was that it didn’t deal with the vices of man and technology that had been bastardized for low life purposes. Not that cyberpunk must have these elements but they are a trademark of the genre. I thought it was real good though and I liked it alot, I wish I could get some new 1986 black and red air jordans grown for me I loved those shoes.

Yeah, I’m gonna say this is pretty cyberpunk, and I like that the title references “We can rember it for you wholesale.” by Philip K Dick. Although Dick was pre cyber punk he wasone of the BIGGEST influences on ALL the cyberpunk authors and Blade Runner is one of the best examples of a cyber punk movie ever. Good entry!

This looks like a story worthy of a sequal.
Well done and carry on…. please

I like the cold, clean, efficiency of this tale – definitely in the cyberpunk genre.

I was going to say that ‘welshed’ is spelt ‘welched’, but it turns out you can use either, to the detriment of the Welsh nation :)

I liked it a lot. The transition between his thoughts and hers was done very well.

Oh, I know you.
Good to see you writing.

http://ficly.com/challenges/251
hey here is another cyberpunk challenge please go enter it’ll be fun I love cyberpunk
and skully dont you write or edit or something for a living?

@MJY – I’m a sysadmin. At best, I write documentation on the infrastructure I build.

I did notice the other Cyberpunk challenge, though, and I’m pondering what my entry will be.