*coughcough*super-awesomecliffhanger*cough*
man this happens to me so often i barely even notice it.
it is a good cliffhanger… but in my opinion, it doesn’t exactly fit… because earlier you said you recgonized her… and now at the end of the story/installment you don’t know her anymore? Just… doesn’t quiet make sense to me.
oh, amber. You’ve become my unofficial editor… Just to clear things up, the question on the last line is aimed at the reader, it wasn’t what I was actually thinking. Sorry for any confusing, hope you enjoy :]
oh, amber. You’ve become my unofficial editor…
Just to clear things up, the question on the last line is aimed at the reader, it wasn’t what I was actually thinking.
Sorry for any confusing, hope you enjoy :]
heh… I hope you don’t mind if i edit your stories?? I kinda feel bad making corrections… If you don’t mind I’ll keep it up, if you do I’ll stop. And that makes much more sense now. Thanks haha. =)
heh… I hope you don’t mind if i edit your stories?? I kinda feel bad making corrections… If you don’t mind I’ll keep it up, if you do I’ll stop.
And that makes much more sense now. Thanks haha. =)
It’s no problem, I like it! ;]