good story i like the film noir style thta is a recurring theme in cyberpunk.

Sometimes I invent laws randomly just to mess with people. :)

It has a nice tone and style that I think fits with the challenge (I wasn’t alive during the cyberpunk “movement”, so don’t take my word for it). I couldn’t tell if it was because of the character limit, but you didn’t break all of the paragraphs apart, which looks nicer. Also consider marking it mature.

I like how you set the scene here… Definitely takes you to the character’s world. Well done!

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LONG LIVE CYBERPUNK