ng guys…. ng…

but delicious!

man this was personal you should just kill em
last line was nice

by the way i also love tangerines

very good poem, lots of passion

Nice movement between the lines

This was deep, and really good. :)

i can feel the hate..awesome!

and her side of the story?

oh, perfect ending! nicely executed!

Very nice.

I love the last line. The rest is not lyrical, but that makes it appealing just in a different sort of way—y’know? But the last line… wow. I think I just creamed.

teehee.

I’m sorry for whatever you experienced that prompted this. But, on the bright side, it made for an awesome piece of writing!

That last line.
brilliant!