woe this gave me chills it was intense and yet vague enough for my mind to think the most horrible things imaginable good frekin fik

Whoa.

Nicely done, twin. o_o This story is freaking awesome.

Intense. Intensely intense! If you can’t tell, I liked it. It’s pretty open and straightforward, which is unusual for you, but that doesn’t mean it’s not without mystery. Good job.