ohg my god this is going to be an awesome hero
he is like the comedian from the watchmen meets vorshcak

MJ do you mean Horshack? or rorschack? Anyway …GREAT effin story! Love it, the Schlub will be an awesome action figure too…

i mean vorshack from the watchmen he is a a psycho killer goodguy who believes he sent by god…kinda like the blues brothers

That’s just fantastic, some great atmosphere building up. I like how this character clearly doesn’t have a hero complex – he doesn’t think that he’s got to bring good about, and who cares about how many heads he has to break to do that – but instead he knows he’s on the shady side of ethics, and he’s OK with that. Good recipe for an antihero, that.

Oh, and The Schlub would look great at the top of a comic book…

ahhhh .This is reality in the highest order. Beast against beast .

Mmm. Hero or anti-hero? It’s something worth thinking about, given how many stories feature heroes being reluctant to kill villains because then the heroes would be “just like” the villains. What this amounts to is generally a lot of villains getting let live because the heroes are wimps. :P

Nice. I like it already, thanks for the link to this.