The (for the lack of a better word) “techno-babble” was very smooth and convincing without overwhelming the piece. I like this quite a bit.

I think the word Jessica might be looking for is “jargon”—which is done really well here. I also like the use of cliches from a hardboiled detective style.

Standing in the rain waiting for a contact is film noir. Standing in the acid rain waiting for a contact selling imagostims is cyberpunk to the core.

this is sweet i like the ice reference too that was classic gibson this is just honey.
I love it.

So smooth, like good crack. Thank you for the ficlet. Awesome Cyberpunk.

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