a decade past being condemnded
this is vivid and just butter

Kind of honored, actually, that you thought it was worth sequel-ing. Very good job and, honestly, pretty much exactly what I was going for.

That is awesome! I’m glad you liked it!

Really neat how closely you got the themes and ideas from Silven’s idea (based on having read Silven’s sequel to the preceding one).
Neat story idea here, even if I’m at a loss what the relationship really is. There’s a warmth to the tone as though they are friends/lovers, but she is hunting him.

yeah i was thinking about the movie “hancock” when i wrote it..