Dramatic cliffhanger at the end!
(Spelling nitpickiness: asked nervously AS she looked around for ANYTHING that could hurt her)
hmm was it the alluring of some siren song?

OoOoO cliffhanger!! I would be mad too if I was aimlessly wandering around in the woods when it’s getting darK!

Proofread mama, proofread! I am on it!