I have no idea what it all means. It seemed like a good idea in my head.

hahaha

Good laugh and probably happened somewhere!

hahaha! great twist, too!

The ending makes it. Nice and concise—not sure if that elevates it above a joke, though. Still, I wouldn’t make it longer—I guess it’s at a happy medium right now. So disregard everything I just said? =/

It’s the sweet moments that I expect after this makes me like it the most.

I’m confused. But I think that’s the point? Or part of it?

I definitely like it as a story.

Sweet in a weird, unexplainable way.