A really neat moment described here. A few typo things to polish up, and I wasn’t thrilled with the easy, fairytale ending, but it was still a really strong little piece of writing.

I found this by way of the random story button. I’m quite fond of it.

For that matter, I’m fond of your story, too! It seems very cinematic to me, which I appreciated. Personally, I could use a fairytale ending right about now. Nice work!