Oooh, Branwen! I wish this didn’t end so abruptly… I want to read more about this character! Nicely done, though!

this is just really baddass how come i had to enter a challenge where everyone just rocks.
dude i really need to give you like ninety pencils

I’m assuming the Ethics Commitee wasn’t told of this.

Sure they did! How doyou think it got all the way to the Supreme Court? :)

“This was the future where torture could be shrugged off as fire sprinklers going off.” This is a great line, very telling of the world that this character’s from. I really enjoyed this.

The same way Lucius Malfoy from Harry Potter got Dumbledore to get removed from Hogwarts: threats.

This is really awesome.
Like, really awesome.
Like…. supremely awesome.
Like…….awesomely awesome.
ORGANISMICALLY awesome.
High Fives all around.

great beginning! I see there’s more.. BTW I love your pic, so colorful, and I love fall..

oh yeah and you misspelled started.

hey there is another cyberpunk challenge up called cyberpunk still ain’t dead.

A bit too epic and feels like a movie trailer.
I feel like it should start with “In a world” being stated in a gravely voice.

Arkitekt, have y0ou ever read cyberpunk? I was going for the beginning to a movie feel, like the opening monologue.