sweet the way she thought he wouldn’t go for it and then in one dramatic swoop he did. I think the “after five minutes” part could be expanded for more suspense, but other than that, nice scene!
I LOVE IT!!!!! SOO cute!!
Yeah, so in the five minutes what were you doing? But it does bring back memories for us girls who were once there many years ago.
lovely little story. You will get friends no matter what you do burberry. You are writing your bio with your stories.
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