i like this too i would have just stayed there
hey you know if you get lost and just stay there actually you arent lost anymore because you live there

and she penned “Bridge to Terabithia” .. lol. it was the forest animals and beautiful scenery!
Well bre, it’s not a story, per se, I think you could magnify it more, but it is a beautiful scene.

I love how you’re capturing how it feels to write and also the peace that nature gives when you can escape from the stress of life.

i wish i had somewhere like that. the closest place i have to yours is… uh a closet. yup. great scenery.

It’s a nice piece, very reflective and describes your relationship to nature in this place. I might wish for a little more description of the paradise itself – but that trades for descriptions of your feelings, so shrug not sure. But I might buy one sentence describing the smell of pine or trees by cutting one of the two “this paradise on Earth” bits at the end. Kind of an awkward echo. :/ But still, calmingly lovely.

I love the overall feeling of this, and the imagery. I love the smell after it rains :)