Eerie, the disjointed story line gets worse and worse for the protagonist until BAM, hit by a bus. The fall of man into himself.

wow stovo you never cease to amaze me this is good i think that when noobs show up with stories like this new crop has been puttin up it makes vets like you step up your game, which you really have lately

AMAZING! I would use my “teen speak” with the “omg” and what not but that just doesnt seem appropiate (i’s guess in spelled that wrong. Please forgive me). I loved it. Amazing…

Gut wrenching this fear stuff.

Stovo, this is your best work yet. Very nice.

Stovo, this is your best work yet. Very nice.

Love this! You have the best descriptions — “broken glass voice, straight into my stomach” is wonderful.

Bizarre and dreamlike. I like how it seems to leave in the air if Fear is a personification or if he is just seeing the face of fear on different people, in memory, etc.

hey you know that would be a good name for a kid.

MJY: My friends and I have decided that we’re naming our respective firstborns Bloodsucker, DeBrickshaw, and some other names I can’t remember. I’ll add yours to the list though. Nice and to the point—and think of the effect on the soccer field.

hey stovo they would just call him BS for short and that would ruin it.

Bloodripper, then. I didn’t come up with the name. =)

that would be cool but you cant technicly rip blood can you? How about blood massacrer well they would call bim bm then and that is like bowel movement, this is tough.

Well, either way, I’m not naming my child anything that starts with a B. Then his/her initials would be BJ…

Very nice.

Talk about a bad way to go. Very well written.

This is scary, and quite bizarre. I like how Fear is never really characterized past the physical aspects.

Oh, just read THX 0447’s comment. That’s what I meant to say, only I didn’t really. I agree with that.

This is brilliant. I love it