Most of it flowed decently enough. I would revise these two stanzas though:

He wouldn’t cheat
He wouldn’t cuss
Unless some one
Really screwed up

She hides herself
With some disguise
Tries to get by
Just telling lies

Both of them are the weakest of the group. I would either revise them or just delete them; they’re really not necessary, I don’t think, while the other stanzas are much better. If you still need a transition, you might talk about how he’s gone, good riddance, or something like that.

Cheers!

i would say (this is just making fun of hobo so dont take it seriously ok.)
Now he cant cheat
his head full of puss
after shoving his brain
under a packed school bus

She tries to hide
and not cause a fuss
but its hard since this girl
drives the school bus

sorry just needlin ya
good poem and ditto what hobo said

Thanks for the help.
I’ll see what I can do and hopefully have some revisions soon.

So I did get rid of the first stanza, but I did like the other one a little bit and couldn’t delete it.