Reminds me of the part in I Am Legend (the book) when he tests different faith symbols against a vampire. Nice atmosphere and mood—until it’s broken in the end, of course. =)
“The food chain is made of barbed wire sometimes.” Very clever!
I never read I am Legend. But it does bring up a salient point. How do you get rid of Hindu Vampires?
Brilliant stuff. I love the atmospheric build-up and the punch line is fantastically delivered. Laugh-out-loud funny.
XD I agree with ethel. I did laugh out loud. Nice work!
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I agree with ethel. I did laugh out loud. Nice work!
Wonderful,whimsically dark, and whitty wordsmithing. Awesome story LoA
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