Hahahaha!

I really did enjoy this short little piece. It feels like something strait out of a sci-fi book or show. It’s got that gritty but humorous quality to it. I’m not sure if that’s what you were aiming for but you hit it.

It could work as something serious too, though. Either way you’ve got a good bit of work here.

Good intro. (Even if I tend to gravitate toward the dark side. ;) )

Lester has a way with words.. I like him!

hey i sequeled ya

Sure you have to use swords. Gotta run to read the sequel