it flows very well, a complete thought, and that gets bonus points, though is it really a stream of consciousness? I think it’s interesting you also made the sky even bigger at the end…
Truely, a stream of consciousness: each paragraph reflects a momentary pause; I really hit a stride with the dense one and thought I was going to run out of space but I got that point across and had plenty to spare.
I’m also a fairly good touch-typist so there are very few errers.
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