Nice paradoxical thing at the end there. Creates the right atmosphere and mood as a whole. The description of the shadows works.

Good description…….I am sure prisoners of all kinds learn to love the darkeness and truly feel safer in it. Lots of pencils for you!

Very very nice piece. Loving all the description you squeezed in here.

hey i like this it gave me some nice inspiration

I like how it ended, it has a sort of bitter taste that adds to the piece.