I know it’s not really for kids. But I couldn’t resist.

This is great!! Although I feel kind of dumb because you lost me with the last sentence. What is only til midnight?

lovely, I like stories with shoes! I’m not going to rate it until the judging.

Aur-eeeeeeeeee-lia! Is it too cryptic?!

Yeah, it’s too cryptic. I can’t figure it out either. Too many possibilities, and most of them completely different. Ambiguous implication. But I definitely like the twist on the tale.

Ok will edit it….

sooo sexy ::salivates::

why change it, the story is good as it is. and it makes you think a bit.

Midnight curfews, dudes, like Cinderella had to be home by midnight! Duhhh.