An unexpected turn of events, openning about a hundred possibilities. More plot pushing than atmospheric, but well delivered.

Play on.

I like the cocky attitude through the first part…really feels like it’s setting her up for a fall. The last line felt a bit forced or rushed or something.

@THX0477: yeah, I’m not entirely happy with the last line, but it needed expressing and I was short on characters.

Interesting. I wonder what the woman thinks she’s looking for.