very dark, its good

Maybe you should say writing is like pooping if you dont do it you get all stopped up.

poop jokes are always funny

@The Read Death: Thank you, that is definitely what I was going for.

@Mighty-Joe Young: LOL literally on that one.

She sounds so lonely – your story really conveyed that to me. Thanks for entering.

i like vampire stories!

the first paragraph was golden!

Beautiful, congratulations!