This gives a nice fantasy vibe, and the child’s POV helps explain more of the things we don’t understand. The language is appropriately mystical sounding. =)

A good review and only 3 pencils? :[

Mamu’s softening at the end makes me very curious as to who the traitor is and what s/he is to her .. i hope we get a sequel?

there is a sequel, several in fact.

oh, wow. love the beginning. what language are you using? it looks like latin, but i could be wrong.