Comments on Janet's Pain by Alexa Reed (LoA)

K-Jellybean

Wow. I get this. I can’t truly identify, but I completely understand which means you’ve conveyed yourself very well.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mayra

Ohh snap! I feel some weird Basic Instinct thing coming on! Bring on the pain.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
tas_13

way to go.
..i like it!!

5pencils for you!*
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I like the way you’ve taken the gf of Dustin’s POV, but I’m a little sad you guys made the original observer such a twisted freak of a girl, because she was me.. lol. That’s okay though!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Alexa Reed (LoA)

@ Elsha – Sorry about that. When I started writing, Tammy wasn’t even going to be aware of Dustin’s attentions. But then characters got away from me.

@ Myra – I was not looking at this as Basic Instinct: The High School version, but if that’s where you take it, I am powerless to stop you.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Alexa Reed (LoA)

Mayra! Sorry! Insufficient caffeine.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
THX 0477

That ending says it all. Been there. Felt that.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

My God, this was awesome.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5