(btw, definitely let me know if this isn’t working…I don’t know if I’m happy with it…partially because its the first time we’ve had any dialog, so it feels a little off, I think…)

This is so much fun… I love the idea of sharing a story with someone else (or many someone else’s). I don’t know if I can articulate this correctly, but I love how we’ve taken something that is normally cured with innocence, and added not only a dark edge, but one that is so definitely sexual. You know? How many movies and television show and YA novels show the two girls… older and younger, cool and not cool, but never dare to say what REALLY happens to girls this age? Okay, I’m starting to sound way more seriou than I want to… I just love how much fun we’re having with this. When you’re ready (once you’ve tired of my little tale) I’ll send you the original pieces this flowed from.

also, you captured some things that definitely weren’t written but need to be part of the story (ie. Julia has money). I don’t want to say much more. I talk too much.

the excitement is happening at this end as well. You are right, though, that anyone outside of these situations rarely sees what actually happens.
At some point, you and I maybe should exchange emails?

btw…I haven’t decided exactly HOW Julia has money…though I’m not certain I want to get too far into that

y’know this might fit in with the Twisted Love challenge

pokepoke
come play

I don’t know how I didn’t see all of these comments! Grrrrrrrr. Hi!!

I am DYING to see where this goes… I was thinking about it last night and then today was kind of crazy. I try to just let my mind drift to it. The slumber party without the slumber party Truth or Dare vibe you’ve started is awesome… I’m tempted to continue it but it’s so good I’m afraid to.

don’t be afraid, silly!
:)
but if this is the end, then this is the end
and somehow I’ll survive

Okay… tomorrow is the day… writing a sequel.