This is good i like the way it is written i hate writing that sounds like writing.

O_o not sure I understand that, but thanks! :D I was writing all of these at 3-4 am after I got bitten by my muse. >.>

omg i get it! i hate writing that sounds like writing

ew didn’t rate it

man i am using the random story button and i read them all i think

Very interesting! Reading on!

Do to how long this is and how many 5 out of 5’s it’s received I think I sould give it a whirl. This first one was interesting I think it will onyl get better. :)

okay i’m going to try to read this in fits and bursts.

Holy crap this is active? I wrote this how long ago? Takes me forever to finish a story. Just btw, this is the abridged version. The actual story is much longer, has a more purple feel to it. I just don’t feel like making you guys read more than you have to. :P