I love these zombie stories they really do rock.
this is really captivating

Tense stuff. I’m on the edge of my seat.

Great execution.

Just a little tweak, though. Add a hyphen in “Undoubtedly-zombie”, otherwise the last paragraph reads a little awkwardly.

Yeah, I debated that hyphen myself. Let’s try it out, shall we?

Ooh, a zombie story. Nice job getting the tension and desperation across. Always that tricky moment in a zombie movie when survival depends on nothing more than the kindness and generosity of your fellow non-zombie man.