haha. i love the ending. nice cliffhanger baby =)

Aww… Poor Zarek. Hope he doesn’t stay out of the clouds for too long. :)

awww comon, life is best while in the clouds. lol the father is such a downer.

Great last line, and I love the sense of hard and fast reality to this portion of the story despite the fact we’re talking about a magic forest. It just feels gritty and real.