the only line i don’t get is: He beat all of their evil out of an Evil bystander.
because a) he has a gun, and b) whose evil is “theirs”
I think you could leave out that lien altogether rather than explain it to me..

But i must say i LOVE the last line..

a) He lost control, for the first time in twenty years. He lost control because the most beautiful person in the world to him is fighting for his life, and God does nothing. how dare this criminal who deserved death think God would save him. And God doesnt.
B) yeah it is fun to shoot people, but there is just something gratifying about beating a man to death with your bare hands.

okay I get it now.. he beat all of the evil of the doctors who can’t stop the HIV out of an innocent bystander…with his bare hands..

yup

powerful.

thx sophia you always cheer me up