a powerful sequel eddie.
Stories like this always disturb me. So your words hit the mark.

great sequel eddie! it ties together very well with the one before it.

i like the sequel it fits well with my first story

hee hee give her claws and biceps.. give me claws and biceps and I’ll fight too!

elsha….well you know what you are

a menace

the most lovely of all menaces, a Siren.

yeah thats you..wink

I’m not a fan of rhymey-rhyme poems, but it really works here. Really great rhythm in this piece. I especially like the last sentence.

thanks anna

wonderful, of course, i would expect nothing less.