awe. this is cute. and it feels real. yes i get it is, but sometimes it’s hard to convey that real feeling through a story
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IMO, in the first line… I think it would flow better if you omitted either the “nearly” or “almost” because they’re saying pretty much the same thing. and it’s sorta repeatitive.

thanks, but I meant to put it that way to show that even though I was almost sure, I still had a lot of doubts. That’s why I added the nearly, to emphasize my doubt that I had at the time.