That’s just disturbing. I love it.

Loved the feel and set-up. Couldn’t resist putting in a sequel to add some reason and depth.

ooo dark ending! I love the envelope inside the magazine and the sly removal. :)

He’s toast.

You’ve captured the seedy set-up and the tension: she clearly doesn’t like to be near the guy and he’s clearly been and done it all.

Really like it.

oooo first time i read it i did not get it. But i read it again and was like- OH SNAP! XD great story

Love it. I know it’s a few days old now, but I was just browsing around and came across it. Really nicely done.

That last line is so scary and wonderful at the same time!