oh but there are no crosses!
There was a Peter in his past he’d crossed, a bully then, perhaps this is the same?
You have a way with awesome metaphors and closure and character, mighty THX, that we all aspire to.

Ditto what Elsha said.

“Let’s call him Peter”. A fitting choice for what this crime boss means to the Schlub. This fic has reached Maximum Awesomeocity.

What Elsha said. And sentence structure. You know how to build a real kick-ass sentence. Awesome.

dude i hate to say it but that is me.