Inspired by the poem “You Who Never Arrived” by Rainer Maria Rilke, one of my favorite poets. You can read the original poem here: http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/rainer_maria_rilke/poems/16353

this is nice very vivd

your rhythm matches very well! And you’ve taken the POV of the one who is missed, which is a nice turn. :) It’s frustrating to be three steps behind..

very beautifully written. it’s hard to find well written poetry these days.

this was nominated for the poetry ficly book.