Comments on The Lonely Road. by The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

weird just plain strange
- Posted over 10 years ago.
AccidentalRob|LoA|

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Huh?

Bizarre! Interesting concept! A bit of a jump, though. It’s not exactly clear what happened – maybe a description of the vehicle earlier in the story, because SUV only comes up after the accident. I also got the impression that when the SUV materialized, it wasn’t moving.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
Lone Writer

Sucks for Smith…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

some spelling mistakes in the first line..
I also wasn’t aware that the SUV was moving, but I quickly knew what had happened.
- Posted over 10 years ago.