oh man…so personal…so full of despair…so close-to-the-bone.
I finished reading the piece and actually felt real sorrow for this fictitious character.

I honestly hope she is fictitious.

I agree with scratch! Great job on Envy!

Great job of describing the fun fair, and the way that when you’re lacking something all you can see is that thing around you, everywhere.

Top stuff.

I’ve never been really good at the whole “comments” thing, but, yeah, what they all said. You’re a really awesome writer to read.

God is in the details, they say… Great detail. You made me feel it…

I think this one can cut awfully close for a lot of people, and is impactful for it. I know that I’ve been in the same ballpark, if not quite so deep in, as the envy described here.

You touched a nerve and spoke the truth for anyone that lost the one they loved.

That was quite an ending.