Lots of fabulous imagery in this. I also like the way meter and the rhyming scheme seem to rush you onwards with the chap until the end. Very nicely done.
Lots of fabulous imagery in this.
I also like the way meter and the rhyming scheme seem to rush you onwards with the chap until the end.
Very nicely done.
agreed with dkscully! But why doesn’t the driver come back?? :)
Nice escapism here. I sensed a real desire to get away.
dkscully
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Trann