okay i didn’t feel the same click with this as the rest of my work. to hell with it i published it anyway. if you agree comment saying so.

YAY! You’re back! The poem, overall, was good, bu you had a bit of trouble with phrasing towards the end
(and my laugh your
companion)

I think

(and my laugh
and i’ll be
your companion
so)

Would have worked better. But great concept, great piece!

great piece
get a pic
i love this
wheres your pic?

I loved this poem. And, Oy, I think you’re right and wrong at the same time. I guess it depends what pianoman meant: the laugh as their companion or the person. I personally think it works as is.

And the elusive pianoman reemerges with another gorgeous example of poetry!

Hey, I remember you! This is a great poem. I really like the rhythm of it.