I do like this quite a bit, though I’m not sure if the wire imagery is metaphor or reality. Makes for some interesting sequels. :) Oh, formatting suggestion, put a double space between your paragraphs, makes it easier to read, IMO.
I do like this quite a bit, though I’m not sure if the wire imagery is metaphor or reality. Makes for some interesting sequels. :)
Oh, formatting suggestion, put a double space between your paragraphs, makes it easier to read, IMO.
Jessica Cahill